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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-09-28 09:05 PM

When next I am touched…

I will recall you
your smile
that drawn out look
of lingering
in your eyes

that spark
that alighted
briefly

right…there…

in your touch
electric

electric is not
enough to express

quivering

not enough to
elucidate

anticipation

at the exhilaration
which remains

right…here

when I recall
the lingering
of your
eyes

when next I am touched

you will hear
my sigh

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

11/2000

Martie

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

1 posted 2004-09-28 09:12 PM

Karilea

I have a feeling you are touched often, and by many things, including poetry. I am touched by this.

See you soon sis!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-09-28 09:24 PM

Shivers...good kind shivers.

Beautiful hip-sis!!
Have a fantastic trip!
Love and I'll miss ya!

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

3 posted 2004-09-29 09:07 AM

Wow -- I think this is the most sensual poem I've seen from you. Though there's much more in it than that, I like that aspect most of all.

~~J

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2004-09-29 09:18 AM

.... SIGH!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

5 posted 2004-09-29 09:19 AM

a beautiful sigh Lady....
Hugs.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

6 posted 2004-09-29 09:50 AM

sigh...how romantic... and to think I didn't like romance before Piptalk! Sigh...

miscellanea

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-09-29 10:07 AM

You touch so many of us with the wisdom of your words...lovely

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

8 posted 2004-10-04 05:48 PM

Great ending here Sunshine, very nice write throughtout.

wayne

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

coyote
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 1077

9 posted 2004-10-04 07:47 PM

Beautifully sentimental and expressive.

My favorite kind of write!

Bravo,
Karilea.

Billy 8)

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-10-04 10:31 PM

Very sensual, very passionate, very Karilea

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

11 posted 2004-10-05 12:14 PM

Beautiful!

Eric

msrascalx
Junior Member

since 2004-09-25

Posts 15
Conway, SC

12 posted 2004-10-05 12:19 PM

I really like this! Great work!

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