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TWO STONE CASTLES
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TWO STONE CASTLES |
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klm Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 58New Orleans, Atlanta |
TWO STONE CASTLES stand on the shore, beside their child's with crumbling doors. TWO feel the waves but fear them not, unlike their child's by curlings crushed. TWO hoist their flags for all to see, their child's now bobs upon the sea. TWO shine their shields in dew cleared skies, their child rebuilds at ebbing tides. The true poet writes to express, not impress. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Pride is all I can think of off Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
but the castles too will submit to erosion someday...good write  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
The sea always reclaims her own...we can only borrow from her...nicely written |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
well done |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Gotta say I love that signature. Good write. Michael |
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