Open Poetry #33 |
What Can I Say (Apartment For Rent) |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
What Can I Say (Apartment For Rent) Looking through ripped newspaper pages looking for an apartment for rent with my lower middle class wages and my white Nova covered with dents that's all I have left to me, but still I rely on your love I lie for your love it isn't easy What can I say, when I see you I flip with your cherry lips, hands on hips Virginia slim dangling carelessly you got your black Camaro a heart of ice, chilling me cupid's broken arrow you keep on your nightstand I never could understand you Now these spiderweb blinds are opening now that I am your insignificant other I just sit around playing the fool, moping, hoping I just sit around playing Atari with my brother counting my change for a bus ride to your door I sleep on the floor it isn't clean What can I say, when I think of you with your sorceress ways, you know who'll play the jester, stay behind your throne you, with your cheerleader legs a heart of another, not your own to you he worships and begs you keep him sinking in quicksand I never could undestand The want ads want me a sad way to make you jealous I sit alone at 4 a.m., under your tree shaking the raindrops to the dust thinking about thinking of you what's new what's he to you it isn't my business What can I say, when it's time for me to find a new rhyme and reason to get some sleep I just dream of you dreaming me dead I scratch at my skin, trying to reap the benefits of a king-sized bed and a restraining order I never could find a quarter to call you am I understanding you correctly an apartment for rent or can I sleep on your lawn in a little yellow tent hey, what can I say at least I'm devoted to you "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i like the way the rhyme trips around in this... much enjoyed the method and its madness |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
love hurts sometimes, this is a painful reminder but so well done..... ~~*~~ |
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