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Undertoned
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Undertoned The many shades of you hold me aside, on this day when a word or two would have brought a smile... and so now I take my leave to a place where solitaire is my game and I hold the winning hand for a change... Why try, I ask myself... why put myself out there when I don't even know where there is anymore and those feelings have brought me here from a place where I was comfortable thinking of you... and should have taken you to my dreams. I am not perfect and do not seek the same but when I long to share words or even silence I want to know that someone is there... on the other side of gray. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I am not perfect and do not seek the same but when I long to share words or even silence I want to know that someone is there... on the other side of gray." I can relate to this Maureen... Heart hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
good use of gray as to mean gray zone... an indecisive thought or uncommited gesture I'm guessing, nice introspective piece.. |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Yes Dave |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nice sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
some men, as well as women, do not want to commit to a lasting relationship, and the older we get, the longer we're single, the more likely we are not to want marriage. And yet, the concept of society is...if your not married, you're not a member in good standing. Believe me...I know this, talked to a lot of people about it, doing research on the subject. It holds true, even in homes for the elderly, when the spouse dies, and one is left behind, the married folk immediately start to disconnect? And I don't believe many people are aware of this. Good write, very much enjoyed, provoking all kinds of thoughts here...smiles and hugs |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is great, and I wonder what colour it is on "the other side of gray" Enjoyed  Maree. Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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