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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

0 posted 2004-07-12 02:18 PM

This Poet Called Me

If you want a glimpse into my soul,
read the words that I write.
See what's going on inside of my head,
through every day and each night.

When you have finished reading my words,
tell me- what is it that you see?
Do you see the meaning behind the words
of the poet that lies within me?

Have you seen inside of my heart,
shared my struggles, and fears?
Have you silently wept with me
as my words have shown you my tears?

If you have ever read my words
Did I make you see?
Did you see the person who I am-
this poet that I call me?

{revised repost}

It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-07-12 02:43 PM

my aunt always told me, poetry is the window to the soul and yours dear heart is one which is compassionate and curious, giving and passionately drawn to go beyond the reasons why. Yours is a heart of gold, never wearing a watch, or perhaps I should say, not wanting to.

How'd I do?

Very much enjoyed...

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-12 02:45 PM

Oh yes. We do put so much of ourselves into our words. That is half the joy of reading poetry, to glean some insight into another soul. Well said.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-07-12 03:31 PM

Yes, indeed, Donna. Your words are always as truthful and caring as you yourself. hugs sweetie, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-07-12 03:35 PM

When I read, I see. When I write, I see, too. Enjoyed this, Donna.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-07-12 06:23 PM

GentlestSpirit~

'Did you see the person who I am-
this poet that I call me?'

Oh yes, dear friend ... I see you through the heart words you share~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-07-12 06:25 PM

To read your words Donna...is to know you!
How sweet you are dear lady.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

7 posted 2004-07-12 06:41 PM

What I see is beauty,
inside, and out.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

8 posted 2004-07-12 08:59 PM

Donna, I agree with the ladies, inside
and out is a beautiful poet and woman.
Who writes of her beauty through the
words that we read.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

9 posted 2004-07-13 06:55 AM

Yes...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

10 posted 2004-07-13 12:50 PM

exactly

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

11 posted 2004-07-13 12:55 PM

Oh, indeed, I have seen that inner poet that resides in you! ~ and to get to know you through your poetry, has been a priviledge, Dear Donna!

This poem could not help but touch the hearts of all poets!

To your inner poet ~ and you!

Linda

CocoBaci
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

12 posted 2004-10-10 05:46 AM

Saw this one in the back pages and had to let you know

it was a treasure of a find!
*~coco~*

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

13 posted 2004-10-10 05:53 AM

so glad that Coco found this and brought it back to the top! I loved the read!!

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

14 posted 2004-10-10 08:40 AM

Yes, a touchingly beautiful "gentle spirit".

Love, Margherita

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

15 posted 2004-10-10 01:48 PM

I see the poet and I have seen her grow in her talents as well. I think alot of us have these same hopes. Enjoyed.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

16 posted 2004-10-11 06:32 AM

Although I do not have time this morning to thank you each individually, please know how much you are appreciated. Good morning all!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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