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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2004-09-27 02:43 PM



Caress
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Caress
Old memories
Hold them in soft array
Finger the lace of gentle face
Smile as the photo leaps once more to life
Pray the smiles outnumber the tears
While swift time still allows
Soft memoried
Caress~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-09-27 02:46 PM


yes, caress the memories, with peace and fondness...and to come to realize that even the bad sometimes has caressed...or for a specific purpose...all of life is astounding, and so are you poetess!  Loved this
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2 posted 2004-09-27 03:01 PM


In your inner most thoughts
Where your mind fails to seek
Seeks and inner most though
Of where your mind
Would wish to be

In your soul in a bad day
Capture a thought
Than ran
To tease
Your thoughts

Into your mouist
Inner most senses

Dave

Susan
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3 posted 2004-09-27 08:10 PM


Ah Marge - one of my favorites - I love looking at old photos.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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4 posted 2004-09-27 08:13 PM


Marge, this is very beautiful. I love
your words as well as the form.
Hugs,
Ethel

jwesley
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5 posted 2004-09-27 09:04 PM


Completely beautiful , my friend...and silly I had passed it by first time around.  Some of us just never learn I guess.

jimmy

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6 posted 2004-09-27 09:15 PM


Yes Marge,
Completely beautiful!
TD

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7 posted 2004-09-27 09:57 PM


Dear Marge:

Very touching and how precious our memories of loved ones are!!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

Isobel
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8 posted 2004-09-28 06:29 AM


Dear Marge

Being able to look back on old memories and photos is a blessing.  As each year passes it lessens the tears and adds another smile.

A lovely read.

Love Isobel ox


Betty
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9 posted 2004-09-28 08:35 AM


This is so pretty Marge.
Love,
Betty

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 2004-10-03 01:22 PM



Thank you, friends~
These are the remembering days of fall~
Touchstone times within this heart~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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