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DavePage
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0 posted 2004-09-27 02:29 PM


Maybe I am getting older, I said I would never publish this of 30 years ago - it is real in the sense that people believed years ago they could drug their children - like sending them to special camps or agreeing with doctors to do something about them, before they annoyed the neighbours - it was of someone frightened who uttered words they meant you to believe.

Dave


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Too Many Mountains

When I met my lady
I didn’t know
Her family lived on Doctor’s Hope
Pills until her mouth was full
Life a flagellent  hope
A life some hours before and between
Just something you might have seen
When you went to bed
There was nothing
It was on the mantelpiece instead

Ownership
By whatever means
Life stop this women
He’ll take her away
I spent the years working to get her off
Then when I had
One sudden cough
And back with trans before I even knew
They knew best
They didn’t care if they blue
Away from the world
But always on the phone
For pills they controlled
No Doctor with any sense would own

Am I talking druggies
No I’m talking ill
Of  a family
Who needed to control
Or else their live’s stood still
And to preserve their lives
And all they believed
They used all that they knew
And decieved


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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-09-27 02:49 PM


a very heartwrenching right, must have been awful to try and try...God bless you and keep you...

this grabs the reader by the soul

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2004-09-27 03:39 PM


Yes, I'm afraid this sort of thing happens more often than we realise.  I'm inclined to just say "physician - heal yourself" and stay away from one pill that leads to another and so on and so on.
DavePage
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3 posted 2004-09-27 03:50 PM


but for the sake of image, you make an addict for someone else to look after because you buy those moments with your neighbours that illuminate you, and society - the object you desire - ends with someone else

Dave

Temptress
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4 posted 2004-09-28 01:31 AM


There are definetely too many people who are too quick to medicate simply because a person acts differently than they think they should. I have a temper (doesn't everyone?) and people tell me I need pills to calm me down when its normal things I get angry about.



Enjoyed

All of my impurities are right here on my sleeve. This is Me"---Faith Hill


DavePage
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5 posted 2004-09-28 10:47 AM


I have to control my temper too

I started meditation when I was a kid and then I did some chinese boxing to keep the control

I still go ballistic at times but I walk away first and then calm myself down

Dave

Bonnie j
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6 posted 2004-09-28 09:24 PM


Pills and more pills. A doctor now adays takes one look at you and say you need a pill for this and a pill for that and a pill to correct the problem the first pill is giving you.
Herbs and quiet time with music is my chosen path.
Interesting write Dave.
Bonnie

Martie
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7 posted 2004-09-28 09:38 PM


Dave

Very Thought provoking.
This is so true, more times then is necessary.....and sometimes the change takes away more then it was meant to.  Wishing you well.

miscellanea
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8 posted 2004-09-29 09:44 AM


Dave,
   Glad you posted this!  It reminds me of children taking unnecessary meds to help them concentrate in schools.  Granted, some children "may" need the medicine, but the increase over the years of those taking medicine is appalling.  After thorough examination, my son was diagnosed hyperactive in kindergarten.  He took medication that calmed him down at school.  By the time he reached 5th grade, he had a teacher that asked us to try him without the medication--that he thought he had become "too" serious, dark.  We took him off the meds and were pleased to find he does well without them now.
   Stimulating thoughts you wrote...
             miscellanea

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