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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
My love I look into your mind And see a question I sought truth I look into your yes And see something I dont want I wanted love You offer a challenge I dont want to prove myself For the rest of me I have to stop sometime And now will do I looked for what I needed And you offered me what I can have Now I will look for the hidden That has it Together over broken stones We will both fall upon Our Axis |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
precious write this especially caught my eyes I dont want to prove myself For the rest of me yes, and one of the many reasons I am single and will probably be so for the rest of my days....and I'm more then ok with that. Wonderful write, the ending leaves a work in progress...wishing you the best |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Lee Whatever you want to be will always have my thought that all you desire you should enjoy Take care Dave |
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