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Open Poetry #33

my mentor lover (senryu)

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2004-07-12 01:33 PM

spare me your mind change
furnish me with your wisdom
enlightenment grant

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2004-07-12 01:44 PM

Coins of thoughtfulness
Spent on flowers and rivers
Change with the seasons

Gloom

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-07-12 02:53 PM

let thy inner truth
shine as a harbor beacon
enlightenment glows

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-07-12 02:54 PM

Enjoyed both of these!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

4 posted 2004-07-12 03:32 PM

very smart write - enjoyed. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2004-07-12 04:18 PM

i have no spare change
nor enlightenment to gift
simply, poetry

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-07-12 04:25 PM

Excellent....and love the replies as well.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain ~

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

7 posted 2004-10-20 06:03 PM

Interesting....

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