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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2004-09-26 10:07 PM


My thoughts grow weary,
my feet are in the clouds.
No longer standing firmly,
on the ground beneath my heart.

I've been wisked off my feet,
and now I am plumeting downward quickly descending into love.
My heart is no longer connected to my brain.

The waves have crossed,
leaving thoughts of you trailing through my limbs.
My lips quiver at the thought of your touch.

I feel a twinge of delight when I hear your voice,
I long to feel your gentle embrace,
and then I am awakened from momentary dream.


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Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

1 posted 2004-09-27 09:59 AM


This exactly describes how I felt when I met my husband - lots of years ago already
vandana
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2 posted 2004-09-27 10:28 AM


enjoyed
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