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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
The words I was looking for I can't find, A focus on drafts of sky. Clouds gray swarming my thoughts with dreams of misunderstanding Patterns that I belong to but can not reach Fast roaring black expressions spinning the white to gray Torrents of power failing understanding Understanding outcasting my mind Sound colour words misunderstandings Soul gathered pain tempting tempestuous skies for understanding Cloud grey swarming firey pestulant answer Telling me what That I am mortal That I can not commune with nature That I can commune with my sex That in your eyes and strengh I am impotent Swirling spining sucking you down Forcing you up sky fractured Death for those with pleasure Preservation for those who do not wish it Living when nothing else matters Ice freezing to fire No-one said it had to freeze to reason As all civilisations It freezes to out Cupping your thoughts within your mindscheme of life Edging your will to blue skies that never happen A peace touched with darkness echoing your regret That having given all What did you get For your pleasure control palace |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Dave, you write from the depths of a soul that searches constantly. May you find that spot within your life and heart that makes sense of it all. I'm still searching, too, and perhaps, that IS what it's all about. Hope this makes sense. LOL. "Patterns that I belong to but can not reach" understanding this |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I watched the clouds and yes but I found my soul back in the 50s Dave |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
One thing is sure we both write from the depths of our souls...can see some soul searching here...good to read, keep up the work  |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Thanks Another of my attempts to make something into a polished and changed set of words but still prefer the original dave |
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