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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2004-09-25 11:15 PM

You speak in words
Of subtle innuendo
Butterfly kisses slightly naughty
And whisper soft temptation

You tease with your tongue
Letting drip sensual allure
Damp delights of desire
Moist words of clinging steam

Your shadow wraps as cloak
Of intimate inclusion
A tête-à-tête of pleasure
Veiled in velvet sweet drape

Your verse slips slowly
Along nerve course tingles
And flutter brushed skin
Blushing heated flesh pink

Oh the seduction of your rhyme
Erotica in dovelike disguise
Word webs woven to entice desire
And capture wicked colored wishes

Mama always said – beware of Strangers

s.a.t.

Dedicated and inspired by the talent and allure of one of my favorite addictions - and poet friends.

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-09-25 11:40 PM

Excellent.
TD

lovejunkie
Member

since 2003-12-31

Posts 93
Indiana

2 posted 2004-09-25 11:48 PM

I understand what you're trying to say here. Good write.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-26 01:55 AM

Thanks friends -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Robert Joseph
Member

since 2000-10-07

Posts 491
South Carolina

4 posted 2004-09-26 05:50 AM

Caught up in the rapture...escalating the senses.

Robert Joseph

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

5 posted 2004-09-26 11:55 AM

You are talented Susan

Brilliant

dave

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-09-26 04:53 PM

Thank you Robert and Dave - your kind replies are much appreciated -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2004-09-26 05:18 PM

Man, that's SOME addiction. Wonderful write and when your muse finds inspiration, you just got to go for it. Glad you did.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-09-26 07:56 PM

Smiling here, Mark, thank you

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2004-09-27 08:02 AM

ms susan...everyone is a stranger
sometime...til momma some stranger sent
a whisper? kewl stuff lady!!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-09-27 09:53 AM

Ah Dark - tis true that at some point in life we are all strangers, yes

Thanks my friend.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

11 posted 2004-09-27 10:35 AM

Beautifully written...and full of clever, delicious double meanings...seductive!

Rf

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2004-09-27 01:47 PM

Thanks Rf - your reply makes me smile

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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