Open Poetry #33 |
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Peace |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England ![]() |
Peace Drop by drop I feel the peace within Stirring, growing, blossoming For its touch is truth Its breath is hope And its lifeblood flows In each and every one Drop by drop I feel peace enter in Filling my mind, my soul With serenity’s pure touch Releasing me from fear Setting me free To breathe in hope To exhale in wonder Drop by drop I feel peace touch me It’s gentle voice soothing Erasing the troubled thump Of clamour and rowdy worry That used to ceaselessly Belabour my soul Now I’m eased My soul is calm and Full of peace Drop by drop I feel peace overtake me And ceding to it I’m filled with light The touch of utter Peace Marsha Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, I would check the roof. LOL A lovely poem. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah, this is good, Marsha, to know that you are feeling at peace... smiling at you, m'friend... |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, my friend... you know I'd have preferred a deluge instead of a trickle... but maybe this way is better... You've certainly written it beautifully! *S* |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I agree, what sweet relief, the shower of peace. ![]() Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
send me some drops if you have any left over then |
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful words Marsha - enjoyed. Chris ![]() Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Enjoyed thre serenity of this, Marsha. |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaDarling~ You write the peace that comes from within sooooo beautifully~ The poems you share with me via email are a treasure to my heart~ This is a lovely, lovely calm that has flowed from your heart-ink ... and I know it's the way you feel~ LOVE IT !! LOVE YOU MORE !!! ![]() *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very peace-filled write Marsha...much enjoyed. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Peace comes as we turn from the sources of anger and frustration in our lives...we walk a different path so to speak...thank God you have found it...James |
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Magnus![]() ![]()
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Mushy, I could feel your worries lifted from you bit by bit as each line came into my eyes. Yes, I do believe you are at peace. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Back to the top you go. Great poem. Well done |
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