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My wish...
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My wish... |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
I don't know what to say or think I hurt so terribly now I've loved you for so many years Now my face is wet with tears I know crying is a useless thing Shameful for a "man" to do My heart was torn before i could even blink So right now... I don't care what others think The blinding pain runs through my veins Rushing outwards from my eyes Lava hot, salty tears Stored and built up, over years Repressed emotions stored inside I've loved you for so long At last I thought I finally had you As with most my life, 'twas to good to be true I hurt more now than ever before I've messed up horribly Relationships... girl and best friend Both of these, now at an end You say you don't feel anything When my lips meet yours So now I leave you with my wish... I just wish... we'd never kissed... One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Further proving how not smart I am... I managed to lose my best friend... who recently became my girlfriend... Now all I have inside is emptyness, and it hurts so much... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This poem was strikingly honest and beautiful at its heart. When relationships change, I believe the best kind are built on friendship. Complications always arise, and if you trust the foundation, great things can be built, even if changes need to be made. Hugs, TD |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It is always a classic. A friend you misread, a girl you misread. Liked the writing. Dave |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 I know |
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