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Open Poetry #33

Missing

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

0 posted 2004-09-24 10:59 AM

Missing

standing
here
with you
alone
puddles of
two broken hearts
trying to mend
cracks
still missing
pieces
within ourselves
to figure paths
of return
.
.
.
Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-09-24 11:03 AM

together you'll both figure it out, which is the excitement of love....
wonderful happy poem...congratulations!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-09-24 02:50 PM

Sometimes, it more of a reconstruction with parts replaced than finding those lost -

Excellent piece-

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2004-09-24 02:53 PM

trying to mend
cracks
still missing
pieces
within ourselves
to figure paths
of return

and within is always the best place we can start. Very well done Bernie

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-09-24 06:47 PM

I understand this

good write

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-09-24 06:50 PM

nicely done, Bernie~

*s
M

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

6 posted 2004-09-24 09:38 PM

nice one

Dave

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