Open Poetry #33 |
Bleeding Heart |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Months out of season, Late in September; Once forest-green branches, Now paled chartreuse. But an oddity rises From pre-dormant roots; Second round beauty Of eye-lovely bloom. Seems wrong, a stem of lockets Protrudes, bells of hearts One branch, a single arch... Dangling from the wrist of autumn. Last stanza of a lovely poem Read beneath a harvest moon, Written in the book of summer... Come read to me some poem, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
absolutely stunning write pleasurable read Smiles and good morning Ice Happy Friday! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
on one branch, you can hear the echo of all seasons, YES !! this speaks my language |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh yes, ice, there it is! You were wonderfully inspired indeed! A beautiful write, totally after my heart! Love, Margherita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those late bloomers... can be seen as something quite special! Ice...this holds a special meaning for me... it's a ! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice All the more lovely when noticed. Excellent |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful just simply beautiful. :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmmm, what a delight. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
much enjoyed...written in the book of summer...life is so like that |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Instructive words and global warming. Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
oh, how this one settled on my soul today thanking you |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
always enjoy your words ice --- try to catch as many as I can... jimmy |
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