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Speaking of Flowers
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Speaking of Flowers |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Speaking of Flowers My flowers bloom has reached a stage Like yellow on a parchment page Instead of sky it faces earth Like back into its place of birth Fragile in the morning sun Tender to its time undone Less its glories opulence Back into its innocence Each flower blooms a proper prime Depending on its place in time And reasons are but filigree This statement of pure jubilee This awe that graces life and swoon Within the sun and face of moon Is essence to the dew of morn The wonder of the new of dawn And fantasy but feathered shaft Flying through a miracles draft |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ Methinks ye be a beauteous rose that grows from Mother Earth. You gaze down upon the dew each morning, and when the sun rises, you raise your open and guiless face toward Father Sky where you behold Grandfather Sun during the day and Grandmother Moon during the night. Your Natural family loves you! ~ and we, your PiP family, enjoy your sweet sonneteering essence each and every day!  The Universe loves you! Star blessings, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel This awe that graces life and swoon Within the sun and face of moon Is essence to the dew of morn The wonder of the new of dawn And The universe loves you  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My flowers bloom has reached a stage Like yellow on a parchment page Instead of sky it faces earth Like back into its place of birth Fragile in the morning sun Tender to its time undone Less its glories opulence Back into its innocence Each flower blooms a proper prime Depending on its place in time And reasons are but filigree This statement of pure jubilee This awe that graces life and swoon Within the sun and face of moon Is essence to the dew of morn The wonder of the new of dawn =============================== Sy-babes....sometimes(most times)I read you and I just lack the words to tell you all that your rhymes speak to me. Like this one, there are so many lines that hold so much more than cadence and metaphor, imagery and meter..... Less its glories opulence Back into its innocence *smiling at you for that brilliant couplet of humility* This one is a must for your next book.... *ww*    I would love to live as a river flows, carried by the surprise of its own unfolding. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, Under your recommendation I will add it to the new book. You have no idea how much pleasure I get from reading your replies. And I'm jealous of Randy haveing the privilage of being there with you. WWS |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Wonderful words this morning Sy. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio Thank you flower. LOL |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Rebirth is a good thing... ~*~ Hugs, Sy...  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exactly what Karilea said... such beautiful words for us this Monday morn Sy. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
morning Mr Sun Beam of Words....a Rebirthing always compliments us, doesn't it... such beauteous words...I'm going to curtsey you this morn... Forgive me, I saw King Arthur yesterday and watched the movie Sense and Sensibility this past weekend, and I can't help but grasp a love for the fragility and femininity of women, the gallentry of men..of that era. Thank you for such lovely words.... |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Each flower blooms a proper prime Depending on its place in time And reasons are but filigree This statement of pure jubilee Oooh,I love this keeper Seymour. Thankyou! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Each flower blooms a proper prime Depending on its place in time And reasons are but filigree This statement of pure jubilee" Flora has always given me such inspiration...I'm glad I'm not the only one!  |
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Kellsue Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 210Waukesha, WI USA |
Beautiful and WOW... I read this five times before I replied! Rebirth is such a refreshing thing... and my day has just been refreshed as well! A definite keeper! Kelly  You can give without loving but you cannot love without giving |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Yes it is. Nancy, You are a dear. LeeJ Saw King Arthur and Sense and Sensibility is my wifes favorate. Thank you for the delightful reply. Chris, Hugs back, thank you. Martie You are a sweetheart. Kellsue Big thanks for the reads and reply. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's amazing...you can write about anything...I wish I had the creative juice you have |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, I think your pretty juicy. LOL |
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