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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
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0 posted 2004-09-23 02:04 PM


The breath comes...

And the world belongs to the
finite space that dances
briefly on our lips.

The breath goes...

And the world is still.

Yet now this space is
infinite.
© Copyright 2004 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2004-09-23 02:10 PM

so very lovely Eric...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....
Susan
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walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-23 02:12 PM

Intake breath, release sigh . . .

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2004-09-23 02:25 PM

Eric~
You drape *sighs* all over the page~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-09-23 02:55 PM

Awesome write Eric....I think I am addicted to your words.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2004-09-23 02:59 PM


...infinite...
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2004-09-23 05:51 PM

~smiling at the thought

M
Margherita
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Eternity
7 posted 2004-09-23 06:57 PM

Beautiful, dear Eric!
Reading your poems is always an experience of suspension of time ... in between the inhaling and exhaling, a glorious perception of the infinite Now ...
I love you.
Margherita

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displaced
8 posted 2004-09-23 07:21 PM

wow
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9 posted 2004-09-23 08:03 PM

Beautiful, Eric.
Hugs,
Ethel
ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-09-23 08:31 PM

What is clearly evident is the infinite blending of your romantic heart, mind and spirit...it flows the page like wine.
TD
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