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Open Poetry #33

Lost

PazSqual
Member

since 2003-11-17

Posts 71

0 posted 2004-09-23 12:32 PM

Lost

I have nothing to offer
It is just my heart and I
Both it and I have been hurt
Since then my tears have gone dry
For a while I have sat in the dark
Shielding from the light my ailing heart
Suspended in time
Making it difficult to get a fresh start

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-09-23 01:12 PM

This hurts. Ergo it is well done.
If this is about you, I wish you to succeed in coming out of the tunnel, back into the light.
Love, Margherita

keoni
Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2004-09-23 01:14 PM

This is a good piece. I can relate all too well. The only problem with being lost is that you are NOT suspended in time. It feels like it, but everything else moves on without you. Crappy feeling. Hope things get better
Jon

"Only God can judge me" Tupac Shakur
"Sometimes it takes a painful loss to realize you are free"- Bouncing Souls

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2004-09-23 07:22 PM

Lonely, this.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-09-23 07:40 PM

There are times when the best medicine is the time we take care of ourselves...and the best love, is that of the people that encourage us to heal.

Be well.
TD

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