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sim0riah
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0 posted 2004-09-22 10:12 AM


This is for the men out there
Coming from a man who has seen
Alot of us get our minds caught up
In our day to day routine

Most of us work hard at first
Fullfilling passions request and desires
But then as the new car scent wears off
So goes the burning fire

Like an extinguishing rain of forget
We spend little time in quality with you
Not realizing that what we've done
Is turn your brown eyes an Ice cold blue

Maybe if we do something a little nice
Like send a flower when not in bloom
Will send a message to that special someone
Our minds are set on you

Or how bout when watching sports
When they walk into the room
Take the remote and turn it down
And have a dance or two

Show your loved one it's all about them
it wont hurt or do you harm
Take it from a man who has seen first hand
And your nights will soon be warm


sim0riah


© Copyright 2004 Richard Konkler - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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1 posted 2004-09-22 10:14 AM


Oh, what a wise man you are -

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2004-09-22 10:19 AM


to look beyond oneself is not only a rare gift, but a road to harmony as well
Nice thoughts, keep them penning


Robert Frazier
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3 posted 2004-09-22 11:15 AM


you wise sage!

Rf

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-09-22 07:28 PM


indeed!
DavePage
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5 posted 2004-09-22 07:38 PM


I dont tell any women what she should be

She and I are there or not

No words no actions no thoughts because there are only two in a basic relationship

Dave

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6 posted 2004-09-23 08:49 AM


yes thinking of another other than self is quite nice. glad someone knows that
good one


Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
7 posted 2004-09-23 08:58 AM


sim0riah
The key of a kiss is the key to bliss. LOL
Enjoyed

Enchantress
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8 posted 2004-09-23 10:13 AM


Oooh you are a very wise man!
Well said!!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

sim0riah
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since 2004-09-07
Posts 253
Wyoming USA
9 posted 2004-09-23 04:32 PM


Well somebody' gotta say it...lol

sim0riah

Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

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