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Rebuilding
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Weathering time, suffering steadily seeping; settling in. Repairing structural damage building bridges closing distance conquering divisions between two hearts. Serene healing begins. The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it is the way of life, and if I may offer this, the more we fight it, the more difficult it will be...allowance and acceptance of things is the key...warm hugs and prayers sent your way thank you for writing and sharing Hugs hugs and more hugs |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wisdom in verse, most definitely.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
rebuilding can be a painfull and long process, but knowing afterwards, you are stonger than you ever were....and ever thought you could be... im sorry i almost missed this one  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Serene healing begins. thought it seems to last eternally until this begins, once it does, much of the turmoil seems to disippate (sp?) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit It is a pill of will, enjoyed the read. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
thank you each, very much... I appreciate you all. Lee, hugs to you also. Susan, thanks for seeing what I was trying to say. Dawn sweetie, like I've heard it said, what don't kill ya, makes ya stronger. Inked one...you sum it up perfectly, thank you for the beauty of your soul, and for understanding... Sir Sey...hugs you, with thanks... The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Spot on Nice writing Dave |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at the building of alliteration! Lovely! |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
luv you  can relate so well to the re building .....hugsssss ~~*~~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
especially at this time, I can relate so well |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
i also relate to this good one |
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