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Untill The Day I Die
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Untill The Day I Die |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion 
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Untill the day I die... I give my heart to you, It's somethin I need to do. Untill the day I die... No longer will I be a fool, Or drown in this tear made pool. Untill the day I die... This is something I need to say, To be sure you won't go away. Untill the day I die... I give my all to you and stand proud, I confess my heart soul and love for you out loud. Untill the day I die... I can't sleep properly anymore now, A queen you are so I shall bow. Untill the day I die... I give my all to you and stand, Knowing you will never leave my hand. Untill the day I die... I will love you past all of this, My ignorance and unrighteous bliss. Untill the day I die... Beyond the day that I die... I owe you at least this much One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
wow awesome writing m'friend glad i stopped by. really liked this  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Now that is what I'd call undying love! A stirring and impassioned write. You certainly are hot, Flakes!  A love like that endures into eternity!  EA |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
so sweet - I hope you enjoy many blessings |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
So tell me boyo...who is she? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
what a strong feeling! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thought id check this one out again lucky ladyMy spirit will rise |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
wow, very powerful ARCTIC WIND |
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