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Open Poetry #33

Jason Lyle
Senior Member

since 2003-02-07

Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2004-09-21 07:27 PM

she does not care
but yet she dares
to presume
at things
Im scared
and what
she wants
are things
I dared
are things I want
That left
me scared

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-21 07:30 PM

Hey Jason, good to read you again.
And it's OK to be scared.

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

2 posted 2004-09-21 07:36 PM

feeling same scars

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-21 07:38 PM

Nicely put together

Using short words allowing readers to guess at direction

Yes - I like it

Dave

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-09-24 04:19 PM

sounds like a dilemma
so nice to see you posting again

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2004-09-24 08:42 PM

You know, sometimes when provoked, humans find their greatness. Nicely done.
TD

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-09-25 01:11 PM

feels like I'm always scared lately now

yes, it's okay

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