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Open Poetry #33

You Make me Dizzy!

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2004-09-21 06:54 PM

I almost wrote you some poetry.
It was right there,
on the tip of my pen!
But then I took one more breath
of the air that surrounds you...
it's so rich!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-09-21 06:55 PM

LOL, hang on, cuz it doesn't slow down 'till after midnight.

E S West
Member

since 2004-08-31

Posts 116
California

2 posted 2004-09-21 06:56 PM

pure thoughts elequently put.. E S West

"always be true to SELF, and follow your heart.."
" Ignorance is the root of all evil "

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

3 posted 2004-09-21 06:58 PM

Midnitesun, you promise?

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2004-09-21 07:06 PM

~smiling~

M

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

5 posted 2004-09-21 07:07 PM

nice

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2004-09-21 07:10 PM

Would I kid you 'bout such a thing? LOL

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

7 posted 2004-09-23 10:41 PM

All right you two, a little oxygen would help. You are both making me dizzy!

Fun write...

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2004-09-24 02:58 PM

Yummy.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

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