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Casting Sounds
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Casting sounds There’s a flick sound snap heard in fly-fishing, Rainbow trout hear the swish of it and know Dinner is ready, or perhaps, Breakfast is coming… Never lunch…for enough deep water buffers whish And who would drink the beers If not the nooners…and I see you across this lake of mind But I see you most everywhere you aren’t Because I have this garden of thought And you tend it well…leaving behind Your touch, which was Much like that of the casting sounds Of a flick snap felt swish ~ and When you fish for me in your dreams, I feel you Wondering if my eyes will return to you In reflection’s pond, Where green meets with sunlight And brown/gold fish play In rippling memories swell. It is autumn now…soon snow prints will show my dreams that you found your way back. And we will talk of those things That we have cast for, and the one love that Didn’t get away. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
It is autumn now…soon snow prints will show my dreams that you found your way back. And we will talk of those things That we have cast for, and the one love that Didn’t get away. tied your words up in a bow~ M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I'm a lover of fly fishing, the art, the symetry, and in your words, you have managed to reinterate the love for the art of love...wonderful |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I found this sad. It was almost a cast off of an old love that we enjoyed and then found lacking. The words, image are excellent but the cast off I had trouble with. Dave |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Mmm this is beautiful, absolutely. Enjoyed Maree  Well I see you doing, What I try to do for me, With the words from a poet, And a voice from a choir, And a melody, nothing else matters. ~Stevie Nicks |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
What a wonderful series of images for lovers. Well done. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Soleil... I love this...very nicely written indeed. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
SN The words you write always touch me, and speak to me of a time, sometime, in my life. You cause me to feel, again. K |
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RMW Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424 |
Nicely ... cast. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"When you fish for me in your dreams, I feel you"  keep those dreams on your line |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wondering if my eyes will return to you In reflection’s pond, Where green meets with sunlight And brown/gold fish play In rippling memories swell. My favorite part, but I loved the whole poem. Love, Margherita |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow....so captivating! Eric |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
autumn has a way of inspiring! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I see you across this lake of mind But I see you most everywhere you aren’t Because I have this garden of thought And you tend it well…leaving behind Your touch, which was "Much like that of the casting sounds Of a flick snap felt swish ~ and When you fish for me in your dreams, I feel you Wondering if my eyes will return to you In reflection’s pond, Where green meets with sunlight And brown/gold fish play In rippling memories swell." Oh, this is soooo good! I really, really like it; it's unique,romantic....wonderful!  ....jo |
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