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The Breath Of Saint Francis
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The Breath Of Saint Francis |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
As the almond tree touched by the breath of Saint Francis... I lie in your embrace. "Speak to me of God..." He whispered to the tree. The tree spoke in flowers that blossomed in the barren scape of winter. "Speak to me of God..." Your fingers whispers as the breath of Saint Francis. And in the depth of a winter that parts only to your touch... I do. [This message has been edited by Ericc (09-21-2004 12:31 PM).] |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like it Eric, soft and subtle. Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
an easy going honesty... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Again, I find myself in pause between the lines. You have a knack for creating just the right soft thought and opening it in just the right spaces by using the form you do. Does that make sense? In any case, it is always a pleasure to read your marvelous poetry. miscellanea |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Eric..once again touching the reader's heart. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
 A wonderful and glowing and sensually soft write. I loved it so much and wish I had written it. St. Francis and St. Clare are my favorite saints who speak to me in many ways. This being one! hugs and smiles, Marti When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country. |
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sim0riah Member
since 2004-09-07
Posts 253Wyoming USA |
Very nice indeed sim0riah Only at night you can see the depth of the sun |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Somehow this strikes me as very sad... and I know it by the sting in my eyes... it's beautiful, Ericc. Sad, and beautiful. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A moment such as this, so very tender, shared between two people is sacred. Beautiful. TD |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And in the depth of a winter that parts only to your touch... I do. A tremor of delight is my response to this awe inspiring poem, dear Eric. Exquisite! I love you. Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
YOU just spoke "to me of God" ~ and I listened...  Love & Light, Linda |
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