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miscellanea
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0 posted 2004-09-16 12:32 PM

Paper, Place, and Things

The name but upon a paper
Dotted with place and things,
A proper noun of fantasy
Cathedral and its rings.

Paper, Scissors, Stone

Paper cut into pieces
Stained glass origami shapes,
A swan that dives and swims away
Passed stone the great escape.

Paper, Scissor, Stone

Swan’s name but a proper noun
In mortar-lined wads of paper well;
Ripples form by wishing stone
Cut images for only time to –

Paper, Scissors, Stone

Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2004-09-16 12:35 PM

miscellanea
Enjoyed this write very much.

Startime55
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2 posted 2004-09-16 12:37 PM

Oh yes, this was very different and I enjoyed reading it...well done...

miscellanea
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3 posted 2004-09-16 12:38 PM

Sy,
I'm glad you enjoyed. That enough will make my day. I so enjoy your writing...
miscellanea

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-16 12:39 PM

Excellent write....I so much enjoy your work!
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

DavePage
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5 posted 2004-09-16 12:41 PM

And the hands behind the back
move to the front
and declaration

Nice touch

Dave

miscellanea
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6 posted 2004-09-16 12:45 PM

Startime,

   I thank you for your kind response.  Yes, sometimes I'm in a different dimension when I think. At least my family thinks so!!!  Thanks again.

               miscellanea

Echantress,
   Sweet Enchantress, you are really a very kind lady in your response!  Thank you, Nancy.
               miscellanea

miscellanea
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7 posted 2004-09-16 12:52 PM

Dave,

  I enjoyed your reply as well!

   "And the hands behind the back
   move to the front
   and declaration

   Nice touch."

   Thanks, Dave.

          ~~miscellanea~~

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-09-16 12:56 PM

I enjoyed this very much...as well as the replys...good one!

miscellanea
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9 posted 2004-09-16 01:24 PM

Lee,
It's good to see you again. Glad it was enjoyable. I haven't written a lot lately and wished something would come out. It doesn't always work upon a wish, yanno?
Thanks for stopping by.
miscellanea

Professor Gloom
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10 posted 2004-09-16 02:47 PM

Enjoyed
inspired a poem of my own.

Gloom

miscellanea
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11 posted 2004-09-16 03:07 PM

Professor,
How kind of you. I can hardly wait to read it.
miscellanea

Sunshine

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12 posted 2004-09-16 03:42 PM

NOW I see how the Professor was inspired...
and how glad I am of it!

PoeTik JusTice
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13 posted 2004-09-16 04:19 PM

loved this write! It was really creative!

XoXo Love Alwayz XoXo
*~Serena~*
"The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love, and be loved in return." --Moulin Rouge

miscellanea
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14 posted 2004-09-16 09:54 PM

Sunshine,
  What a lovely thing to say.  The Professor needs no inspiration though, as he appears to be inspired constantly with little things he perceives in nature and in city dwelling.
I really enjoy his poetry and all I read here.
                      miscellanea

PoeTik JusTice,
   First, let me welcome you.  YOu must have slipped into the Blue Pages when I wasn't  looking.  It's nice to have you here.  (By the way, I love your clever name!)

  Glad you you enjoyed my writing.  Thanks for your kindness.
                       miscellanea

BluesSerenade
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15 posted 2004-09-17 07:37 PM

Got me thinking,

A stone can skip across a pond and eventually sink to the bottom. Paper can be crushed and crumpled, or kept as a keepsake. And scissors can cut to the quick. But sticks and stones won't break our bones.

Really nice work, misce~ and thanks for letting me take off with my own interpretation.

miscellanea
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16 posted 2004-09-18 11:36 AM

Bluesy,
I'm glad you played around with interpretation. The poem is whatever one wants to make it. The symbolism in it could only be understand if one was there at the right time and the right place,or, perhaps, I should say wrong time, wrong place. Glad you enjoyed.
miscellanea

Marge Tindal

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17 posted 2004-09-18 08:03 PM

Miscellanea~
Layered ... just right~
I enjoyed word-sifting through this dear lady~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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rascalx
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18 posted 2004-09-18 09:20 PM

I love the rythym and flow of your words... coupled with the imagery makes this a beautiful write.

Enjoyed this much I did. (I sound like Yoda lol)
- Jeff

Susan
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19 posted 2004-09-18 09:47 PM

Made me think - lucky swan, to make the escape

Enjoyed

Susan

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Skyfire

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20 posted 2004-09-18 11:58 PM

Enjoyed; thanks for the read

and then He created the horse...

Ratleader

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21 posted 2004-09-19 01:00 AM

Your eye for unique comparisons is -- well, it's fun! When I see something you've written, I always know that I'll find something creative and "different"....

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Margherita
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22 posted 2004-09-19 12:31 PM

How strange ..... I feel I am the swan .... and from this swan's perspective this is a write that makes ripples .... it has great visual power.
You are unique indeed.
Love and hugs.
Margherita

miscellanea
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23 posted 2004-09-20 09:12 AM

Marge,
   I'm glad you found sifting a pleasure.  It is always a treat to have you visit!

          miscellanea

rascal,
   Thank you for the fine compliments. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Yoda!
              miscellanea

Susan,
   Susan, I suppose that depends on the swan!  Nice to see you again!
              miscellanea

Skyfire,
   Glad you stopped by.  Thanks,
             miscellanea

Ratleader,
   I hope that's a compliment!  I'll take it as such because there is no changing me.  I just think differently, and it's going to come out that way!  I so wish I could write of love and nature the way other poets do so beautifully.  I just don't have the words! Glad you enjoy the creativity!  It's a good way of avoiding words!
                  miscellanea

Margherita,
  It's so very kind of you to say so.   YOu can be a swan upon my poetic ripples anytime you please, dear Lady!  It's good to see you again.  (I'm glad to see your poetry again.  It's alwayss been so uplifting!)
             miscellanea

suthern

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24 posted 2004-09-20 02:46 PM

In one of your responses, you mentioned another dimension... Do you have a map I could follow to get there? *G* The perspectives you share open both mind and heart... and that's good! *S*

I enjoyed this very much, my friend...

Earth Angel
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25 posted 2004-09-20 03:00 PM

Missy, you are a unique and wondrously creative writer! I always enjoy reading your poetry. I appreciate the air of whimsy in so many of your writes.

Your poetry often is the fresh breeze that I need on a stuffy day!

Linda

miscellanea
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26 posted 2004-09-20 07:14 PM

suthern,
  I'm afraid a map has not been invented yet!
I'm lost out there somewhere.  If a cartographer maps it out, I'll be sure to send you a copy.Thanks, Sweetie.  You're a doll!
                miscellanea

Larry C

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27 posted 2004-09-21 02:04 AM

miscellanea,
Odd that you would claim to not write of nature when I swear there was a swan in this write! Well done.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

miscellanea
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28 posted 2004-09-21 09:17 AM

Earth Angel,
  Sweet Angel, you could pay me no higher compliments than those!  I'm a fairly serious person and the air of whimsy keeps me in line a bit-life is too exciting to be stuck in one place too long.
               hugs,
              miscellanea

miscellanea
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29 posted 2004-09-21 09:19 AM

Larry,
I had to go back and check my responses to find to what you were referring. After doing so,"You naileld me. I did refer to nature!" I just can't do it smoothly, initimately like other writers. There, have I covered my bases now??? Have a good one. It was a surprise to see you again.
miscellanea

iliana
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30 posted 2004-09-21 12:44 PM

Well, sis...my, my, my...on second read, this is now my favorite. Very, very good. luv ya, jo

[This message has been edited by iliana (09-22-2004 02:30 AM).]

miscellanea
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31 posted 2004-09-21 01:25 PM

Jo,
  Glad you liked it.  I'm surprised you like it better than the one about Dali's Surrealistic Egg, though.  It was much smoother than this...  Sometimes I wonder if I should iron and press my thoughts before putting them down on paper, in hopes that my words might come out a little smoother!  Thanks for message.  All is ok.
                misc cathy

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32 posted 2004-09-22 01:29 AM

wow that was incredible

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

miscellanea
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33 posted 2004-09-22 05:17 AM

snowflake,
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I guess I was remembering childhood games when I wrote it. It's funny how we can relate to those games! Thanks for your kind response.
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