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sim0riah
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0 posted 2004-09-21 11:31 AM


Soft hands caressing your neck
A smile needs no explanation
Massaging your neglected skin
Bringing a night of exploration

Passion upon rose pedals
Under a cresent moon
Firelit shadows dancing in the distance
Describing our every move

Cool air flowing across the entwined
Makes for chills Even though Hot
Each endulging in Passions flames
Ready to fulfill and take the lot

Breath upon breath, Skin upon skin
Motions of two as one
Reviving each others thriving existence
Reliving a life of love

A soft stroke upon a face of life
Our eyes focused on desires sought
A kiss as deep as the bluest of oceans
In my arms, you are caught

sim0riah



Only at night you can see the depth of the sun

Sim0riah

© Copyright 2004 Richard Konkler - All Rights Reserved
Ericc
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1 posted 2004-09-21 11:37 AM


Beautiful!

Eric

DavePage
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2 posted 2004-09-21 11:48 AM


Yes.

I need a cold shower after this.

Enjoyed it.

Dave

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-09-21 05:46 PM


A soft stroke upon a face of life

beautiful words~
M

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4 posted 2004-09-21 06:21 PM


very passionate
sensual  nice
nice vision


ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-09-21 08:06 PM


Excellent write.
TD

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6 posted 2004-09-22 08:04 AM


What a nice way to be caught...a great ending to my poem....I enjoyed it very much, very passionate and romantic!

I am very touched that I have inspired you!

I need a cold shower......LOL!

and then some warm blankets afterwards...

Love and hugs
~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!


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