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Of Comings, Goings, And Keepers
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Of Comings, Goings, And Keepers |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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Memories come, memories go we hold closer those bringing tears of happiness, rather than sorrow. People come, people go some soon forgotten, others helping us grow into the individuals we are; shaping who we become through pain and joy... reaching further, towards the sun seeking the stars, searching for that one special 'thing' we can hold and in our hearts forever keep... You, my love, are that keeper..... The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-20-2004 08:21 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Glad you found that keeper. Enjoyed the read. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
And you, DD (Dear Donna) are "a keeper"! A prodigiously reflective and sagacious write!  ~ May your life be rife with keepers! Top Love, Light, & Meaningful Relationships, Linda |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And this is a  of a poem!Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ My GAWD ... this is soooooooo lovely~ You are word-blessed~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"reaching further, towards the sun seeking the stars, searching for that one special 'thing' we can hold and in our hearts forever keep... You, my love, are that keeper....." And you dear Donna are a keeper as is this wonderful piece! Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Saying I love you is the easy part, but caring for love as you have so delicately described here within these words, is the key...caring for love...thank you lady poetess for your lovely heart and mind. |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
How true it is that people come and go, and there are only a handful of them who stay and help us grow... Not to say that those who left have never aided us in our growth, since they came into our lives for a special purpose...  Gentle Spirit, LOVE your poem!  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Well done. "I tried so hard...But in the end...It doesn't even matter...."~Linkin Park |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
others helping us grow into the individuals we are; shaping who we become through pain and joy... reaching further, towards the sun seeking the stars, searching for that one special 'thing' we can hold and in our hearts forever keep... You, my love, are that keeper..... Oh, yes... *S* And how blessed we are when we find such a one! *S* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you all dear friends for tolerating me while I indulge in my Rambles..... have a great day, and thanks. PEACE ~D~ The greatest beauty on earth, is found in the hearts of those who love.... [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (09-21-2004 07:26 AM).] |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Mgroves, my thanks to you. Thanks to everyone! The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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