Open Poetry #33 |
Dear God (repost) |
1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
Dear God, yes, it is me again ...I know I keep bothering you but lately I just don’t seem to be able to accept my disappointments and you think I am strong when I am so very weak and it is not that I don’t trust you I just wonder if anyone is listening when I am speaking I keep reaching out but far so short of the edge a finger tip’s distance maybe it is my own fault in needing so much more to believe in but my soles are still burning from fires that I walked through with my eyes wide open and then to walk backwards in steps taken blindly in wanting my own way to regain my balance with skinned knees and elbows and I try so hard to understand heal to toe and if it’s not too much to ask you could you please get back to me for I need your help just some words cut out |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
I believe I was uttering those same words... not but one day ago. Thanks for writing this. It helped me feel like I was in good company. *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I love the touch - superb. The thing about the quality of people writing here is that it makes you think and want to try something new. Dave Getting myself into something again, can I? You finally get to heaven and St Peter said "sorry we are unavailable, please leave a message and we will get back to you, if the meantime we will play you some music", please press 1 if this is urgent, press 2 if you are more than one, press 3 if you have no insurance, press 4 if you have attended church recently, press 5 if you still feel you are alive, press 6 if you must, press 7 for alternative heaven, press 8 for a list of recommended restaurants, press 9 for hell. You may of course hang up but we will be there tomorrow, waiting for your call. Dave |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And when it's needed, He'll carry you through. Peace... If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a perfect example of how we act out like children, ever though we are adults, wanting what we want, when we want it...and yet, the truth be known, perhaps in many cases, what ever has happened isn't bad for us at all, but...instead, a duel blessing? Marvelous write...giving the reader much room for thought |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
A poetic prayer....beautifuly said. Eric |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Helen: God will answer your prayers but He gives us what we He knows we need, not what we want! I will reach out and hold your hand and pray along wih you. Hugs, Marti When women are depressed they either eat or go shopping. Men invade another country. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
believe i was just praying for same thing this week thanks for sharing |
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