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Damage |
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Darker Season Junior Member
since 2004-04-01
Posts 48Wisconsin |
Hey...this is another set of lyrics that I wrote that won't ever see the light of day because of my band's demise...hope you enjoy, anyway Damage Girl, you somehow manage To pretend that nothing’s wrong But I can see the damage That’s been haunting you so long… So long…so long… I know you’ve made mistakes A cage that you have built Stacking up your old regrets Into these walls of guilt But don't you think it's pointless? An ocean with no shore Pulling you out farther To a place you’ve been before Drowning with emotions Battling your mind Chained down by the teardrops That you should’ve left behind You’re locked inside the pain Oh, but if you only knew You’re not reaching out for me I’m reaching out for you Because you can’t go back You can’t go back You can’t go back Oh no, you can’t go back… You can’t…You can’t go back… So…let me put my arms around you Let my love and charm surround you And together Oh, together We can start a brand new day [This message has been edited by Darker Season (08-27-2004 05:46 PM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Well, I sure like this and especially "Chained down by the teardrops that you should’ve left behind" Hope you get another band going because when music's in the soul you simply have to play along. |
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Annie Shadow Junior Member
since 2004-05-02
Posts 27Drifting |
Another great song, Andrew. Keep it up!!! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
With quality like this, it is a matter of time before you launch something else. Yes - very good Dave |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
would love to hear this to music...wonderful sound and feelings |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
got a tear in my eye and a smile in my heart this was beautiful |
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