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Mmmmmm - yeah baby
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Mmmmmm - yeah baby |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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You look so smooth In your nude cocoa skin Mocha hued brown Long lean lines Lush and inviting Wild passion inciting Stimulating I drool in anticipation For the touch of you To feel you against my lips To taste you in my mouth To lose myself in your flavor The ecstasy of your nature Captivating Baby, say you’ll be mine Let me unwrap you Then devour you with my eyes Inhale the scent of you Bask in the truth of you And the promise you bring Inviting Then I shall consume you All of you One bite at a time Savoring Never wavering In my quest for satisfaction Oh chocolate bar of mine s.a.t.  Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
DArn...darn, darn..darn....and I thought this was gonna have to go to mature... Sheesh...you can see where my mind had gotten trashed right into the gutter.... Well done Susan....yepper, it is....perhaps bows and arrows at 30 paces...(big paces).. with the little stopper thingie on the end, of course.... |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
and when those chocolte bars get smaller..the urge remains, smart marketers!Nice and suggestive |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks Barry - for falling into my humor - and for your playful reply - big smiles here. EC- yeppers, it's a giant plot to dominate the world!  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
wow this ones HOT! all that and a candy bar  lol ..hugs too ~w |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, I don't often eat chocolate, but this just about made me want to grab a chocolate candy bar! Funny and hot, a good tasty write. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
That's the kind of chocolate that melts right in one's mouth ~ and leaves you begging for more!  Tasty treat on several levels!  Love, Laughs ~ & chocolate bars! Linda |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
 and then He created the horse... |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hey, HOT chocolate! I love it! (had me reaching for the ice cream to cool off . . .)  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ya'all are soooo much fun, and your playfulness makes me smile Thanks for having some fun and kicks with me - ah, the power of chocolate  Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
You don't want to know my thoughts. Lol. Maybe I'm just too bad. Then again who isn't? The difference? Knowing when to reveal and when not to. - Haze |
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devinechild22 Senior Member
since 2002-08-28
Posts 571 |
cHoCoLaTe... The best love of all! It will never tell you that you look fat in that pair of pants (but it sure will make you that way.)It doesn't watch football! It listens to your problems... until you consume it of course... But... it will fail you in one aspect.. too much of it makes you sick. (Just like with boys!) *Allison* ~~~***~~~Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland~~~***~~~ |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Oh Susan... Such hot descriptions of a chocolate bar. Now why have I never thought of that? Do you know we could actually get high on chocolate? I was having chocolate fondue at Haagen Dazs with a friend, and near the end, we were kinda giggly and excited. haha... It MUST have been the chocolate overload.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Mmmmmmmmmm .....that was a great read! Passionate .... and I know of this passion! The producer of this chocolate bar might be interested in hiring you for an advertising campaign! Love, Margherita |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Smiling here - yeppers, chocolate- the legal feel good! I'm a chocoholic and I freely admit it. Sounds like I'm in some good company Thanks for your fun replies - they too make me feel good Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Aw.....I have this big chocolate bar in my refrigerator....now after reading this, I think I'm gonna have to go have some. Hehehe... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I thought you were talking about my girlfriend...luscious...one of my favorites...I'll be back...James |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Alli, I've cleared my house of the stuff, trying to quit cold turkey-  yeah right!James, glad you enjoyed Susan |
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