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Two Ways |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
There are two ways to find you. First...with opened eyes. As if by holy chance you simply fall before my gaze. The day belongs to opened eyes. Second...with eyes that are closed to the doubt of the world. And fingers that dream in the faith of gathered darkness. The night belongs to dreaming fingers. There are two ways for me to find you... By day. By night. Two ways...that lead to you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
cool, cool write I'm keeping it |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful writing, Ericc M |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
very nice.  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"And fingers that dream in the faith of gathered darkness" completely cool lines here enjoyed this |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ericc Only two ways? With so much love, I'd bet there are more! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Two ways all ways. Well done, Eric. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it seems the only word that comes to mind when reading you is "awesome" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Eric, this was precious, soft and utterly mystical....gathering up much belief. Lovely |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When the night opens her gates, we just slip through the veils, we need no map to reach the meeting place ... beyond time and space, we simply touch and linger in our embrace. This is the way ... You always inspire, dear Eric, with your beautiful words. I love you, Margherita  |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Can we ever get enough of your romantic poetry? I don't think so!!! It's always such a pleasure to read. It's a time of slowing down, pausing, just to appreciate... miscellanea |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very nicely written Eric...you probably will laugh if I told you that "One, if by land... Two if by sea" came to mind...forgive me, when we get old, sometimes those things happen.... I do like your poem, very smooth, to the point and accurate... |
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