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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
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My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-09-18 06:56 PM


I knew when an angel whispered into my ear,
And she took away all the doubt and fear.
So now I'm giving her a birthday surprise.
I could have given her diamond rings,
But she likes the smaller things.
I would have given her the stars above,
But all she wants is my love.
Could have got her flowers,
Or the tallest of all towers.
But she doesn't need any of that stuff,
Or want some steak dinner that's to tough.
So, this should be a nice little surprise,
I'm sure it'll light up her eyes.
Though it isn't much from me,
It's all she needs to see.
This little birthday surprise.

Happy birthday Jess

One cannot see what lies within if one does not see the obvious

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-09-18 09:42 PM


And THIS is the perfect gift!!
I'm sure whe wil love it Kyle.
A lucky lady she is.
Hugs and Happy Birthday Jess from me as well~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-09-18 09:43 PM


Wonderful - no better gift than that of your heart.

  Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-20 05:36 PM


Nice wishes

Dave

Paula Finn
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missouri
4 posted 2004-09-21 12:35 PM


Nicely done son of my heart...written words are precious gifts indeed.
Copperbell
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since 2003-11-08
Posts 956

5 posted 2004-09-21 08:33 PM


sweet - hope you all thoroughly enjoy the celebration
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