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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-18 10:02 AM

Heart Of Glass

you left your impression
finger prints on glass
a constant reminder
how fragile I really am

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-09-18 10:04 AM

1slick_lady
I like it, I like it.

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2004-09-18 10:56 AM

Nicely done metaphor

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

3 posted 2004-09-18 12:07 PM

It doesn't take much to remind us that our hearts are made of glass...

Hope they don't press too hard when they leave their fingerprints behind...

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2004-09-18 12:38 PM

but then, some impressions on the heart do not would but rather heal and grow

an that's wonderful to know

like your poem a lot!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2004-09-18 02:07 PM

Wow Helen....!!!!!

Eric

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

6 posted 2004-09-18 02:16 PM

And here I'm so clumsy . . . crash!
Dang!

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

7 posted 2004-09-19 07:28 PM

this is great - what a wonderful way to say it - thanks I will remember this metaphor for a long time - paul

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2004-09-19 10:08 PM

The title caught my eye. You said just what I feel.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

9 posted 2004-09-19 11:24 PM

A prism waiting for someone to free its soul ....

... enlightening as always!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2004-09-20 08:00 AM

fragile is so seductive
when offered as a gift
to the eyes of a lover

enjoyed this ms slick

Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

11 posted 2004-09-20 05:39 PM

. . . finger prints are fragile

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