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EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

0 posted 2004-09-17 09:31 PM

Thou Art the World to Me

When the wings of butterflies stir the air,
They give birth to the breath that is my voice,
And words like butterflies are naught but fair,
‘Tis but a matter of making a choice.

Our choices speak truth as too whom we are,
And to our own selves we must remain true,
Wedded to the routine and the bizarre,
I’m the sum of the love I have for you.

So to the wind I bequeath my conscience,
In the hopes that my tidings reach thine ears,
They’re uttered with frankness, sans ill pretense,
May they convey the music of the spheres!

My love, my passion, seethe ever for thee,
For my darling thou art the world to me.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

SouthernWinds
Junior Member

since 2002-08-23

Posts 12
Dreaming in the clouds

1 posted 2004-09-17 09:38 PM

I think you've penned a beautiful poem here. I'm sure the recipient will be melting.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

2 posted 2004-09-18 07:48 AM

Thank-you SouthernWinds. I am glad you liked the poem. It wasn't written for any one person though. It was just words that had been tumbling together in my head for a week and I finally had to put them down so I could stop thinking about butterflies. (Wink!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

3 posted 2004-09-18 11:58 AM

My Dear Shakespeare,
Your words are beautifully spoken.
You truly are Shakespeare.
Love it my Dear Friend.
This too has been added to desktop.

:-)

Amour Vous

;-)

Always

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2004-09-18 12:20 PM

EvocativeVerse2
Very romantic enjoyed the read.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-18 12:46 PM

So very romantic- filled with heart- and prettily said as well. Very nice.

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

6 posted 2004-09-18 01:21 PM

"I’m the sum of the love I have for you."
-- I am, because of you...

This is so sweet! Thanks for sharing!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

7 posted 2004-09-21 12:57 PM

Needed a smile ;-)

Amour Vous

Still love it after reading this one and all
the others a dozen or more times.

;-)

ribbits and ribbits
Amour Vous

;-)

Always

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

8 posted 2004-09-21 09:24 PM

oh and here i thought you hadn't been around.

well as always a lovely poem.

snow

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

9 posted 2004-10-01 03:27 PM

Gonna be late
But had to comment on this one again.

Amour Vous

;-)

Always

Hugs

I'm gone

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

10 posted 2004-10-01 03:30 PM

I'm glad this came back and I read it again -sweet romantic heart -

Susan

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

11 posted 2004-10-01 04:04 PM

The rythm and flow of this piece matches the content well. You state it as it should always be. I much enjoyed not only how well it read but the conviction shines as well and that takes notice also.

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