Open Poetry #33 |
aberration in vanilla |
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sometimes the lines were/are black ink and the road was/is too only the middle seems/ed real shoulders were/are just curves with fists on the end and night and day blend/ed at the seam of east with cloud mark erasers we were/are here before when we were/are strangers we both look/ed the other way when crossing the street we walk/ed side by side just out of sight could be/have been lovers if the sale isn't/wasn't on or the lights at the corner bar or the honk if you love/loved jesus car ___Dark |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
love your imagery Dark. You have a way with words |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Morning Dark - this makes me want to hit a road to nowhere in the middle of nowhere, just trees and mountains and the kiss of night with some serious tunes and the windows rolled down. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The give/take of now/then swings/push one's mind/thoughts in several... ways. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
smiles, was a very full view of another picture, perhaps another place, another time sad, and yet, realistic... like listening to cello... Good Morning, wishing you a day of sunshine moving you slowly into a fine weekend... |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
cloudburst of invisible ink.. K |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Enjoyed you walk with words, as always! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
we were/are here before when we were/are strangers we both look/ed the other way Been a long time between bar flies and jukeboxes. Enjoyed these words taking place in the past and present tense, DS~ |
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