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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-09-16 12:25 PM




storm watcher ...in the wind and rain

shadows fall away in the fog

they were never even there it seems

fans run through the night

keeping hot dreams cool from the heat

like ice in your glass

golden hours do pass

into sleep and return

times to come

from the heart

strong with life and love

letting go of the world



8-16-04

JDW

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1 posted 2004-09-16 07:10 AM


Powerful.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

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2 posted 2004-09-16 07:42 AM


intensly holding to faith, hope and greatness of what will be...
enjoyed

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3 posted 2004-09-16 08:46 AM


WOW Wolfy....very thought provoking and powerful write!

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

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4 posted 2004-09-16 08:56 AM


I like this one very very much James!
Well done.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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5 posted 2004-09-16 08:59 AM


Very well expressed!
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6 posted 2004-09-16 07:39 PM


thanks so much ....happy to share my thoughts anytime ......HOWLLLLL
~the wolf

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7 posted 2004-09-17 03:36 AM


Enjoyed, thanks for the read

and then He created the horse...

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