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Open Poetry #33

An Updated Weather Report

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-09-14 05:03 PM

An Updated Weather Report

you come in storming
unaware I have
thunder of my own
do not try to
make me tremble
for you might find
lightening strikes twice
and you will be
shaking in your
own skin

just some words cut out
from the diary of my heart

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2004-09-14 06:04 PM

I’m sure Ivan the terrible
Knows better than to mess with our Hellen,
Keep safe lady

Gloom

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2004-09-14 06:14 PM

oooh I love it ^_^ Very nicely done!

and then He created the horse...

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

3 posted 2004-09-14 08:24 PM

great poetry here - Paul

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-09-14 08:26 PM

Love this Helen!!
And you stay safe as well.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-09-14 08:27 PM

Like it!

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2004-09-14 09:43 PM

Helen, you let that bad boy have it! If he runs into you, he will be one sorry dude!

Hugs and be safe, Marti

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

7 posted 2004-09-14 09:49 PM

well, you scared me!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

8 posted 2004-09-14 09:53 PM

LOL, he may turn and go away, after all.
Stay safe, don't mess with Ivan the Terrible.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2004-09-15 12:51 PM

POWERFUL!!

Superbly done, 1slick!!

GRRRRRRRRR...CHOMP!

LOL

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-09-15 12:53 PM

please stay safe Helen...

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2004-09-16 08:24 PM

Stay safe, Helen.

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