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vampiana
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 296
Nothing and Nowhere

0 posted 2004-09-14 01:47 AM

Feeling the heart and pain in his lyrics
While the music plays on
Drawing you into its fantasy world
Where you can be yourself
You believe him, he's telling the truth
You give yourself over to the power of his osng
Your vunerability exposed.

But as the music dies down
And his voice fades away
Depressing reality
Hits you hard as you realise
That his song
Wasn't true
All along.

Tomorrow, is the today we feared yesterday.

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-09-14 02:00 AM

I only wish I knew who you were talking about. There are so many musicans that in the past and in the present that spoke such clarity to so many. Who are you talking about. I have an idea that I might know, but do tell and do it through an e-mail please. I might not come back to this forum for a while and when I do it will prolly be a pain in the rear to find this piece amoungst all the others. I liked.
-GIS

He has made everything beautiful in its own time. -Ecclesiastes 3:11

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-09-14 11:29 AM

Depressing reality
Hits you hard as you realise
That his song
Wasn't true
All along.

exactly....truth is found in these words be it a musician in real, or just the musician in our minds. very well done.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-09-14 11:35 AM

But as the music dies down
And his voice fades away
Depressing reality
Hits you hard as you realise
That his song
Wasn't true
All along.

thank goodness you've realized this before it was to late, after investing perhaps years and years of committment

Hugs

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

4 posted 2004-09-14 11:41 AM

OUch! Glad you found out in time. Liked your poem a lot!
miscellanea

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-14 12:42 PM

but at least he sang

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2004-09-15 06:51 PM

Nice writing...James

mrmojorisin5908
Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 103
Colorado

7 posted 2004-09-15 07:25 PM

I think music is so emotional that if you are listening to a song you are at the heighth of your emotion. Once that songs over you realize your back in reality. Awesome right I appreciate this one"

"When the Music is over turn out the lights."
-J.D.M

Andrew A.
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