Open Poetry #33 |
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Once I Was A Whole |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light ![]() |
+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ I once was a shining whole But I shattered into fractions, ~ Full of disappointments And life's dissatisfactions. At times the ledgers balanced, Then at others they did not. Some brimmed with happiness, And others rife with fraught. Whenever I thought in negatives, Things grew from bad to worse. ~ Until I thought in positives, And discarded the perverse. I've long since integrated, Myself back to a whole. I look at all the good in life ~ Adding Light to my soul! +*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+*+ |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
BRAVO!!! I absolutely love this....You show beautifully that there is always something good that comes out of even the worst situation...Wonderful writing... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent dear Linda... Such an uplifting and positive write. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
you are lovely....this is just beautiful! hugsss you I don’t want the world to see me |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a shining example of positive thinking !! Yes i can!!! words to live by ![]() |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Startime ~ Wow! Thanks! That was a very enthusiastic reply! In fact, it was downright, "Wonderful"! ![]() ~ May you always be an integrated whole! Love & Starlight, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Nancy ~ I aim to please! lol In actuality, I please myself when I write on a "positive" note! ~ It can lift my spirits as well if I happen to slip into the doldrums! ![]() ~ May all your days have a positive spin and lift your spirits high! ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Eyes of Green ~ A comment from someone as "lovely" as you, is indeed lovely! ![]() ~ and thank you for the "beautiful" response to my poem! ~ May love and beauty be your constant companions in life! ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
inked goddessa ~ Yes! You can! ~ and you do! Thank you for your "positive" response. ~ May your life be full of joy and positivity! Love & Light, EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
iliana ~ Oh, yes, Darlin' lily jo! Laughter does seem to put all our pieces back together again! If only poor Humpty Dumpty had known that! lol ~ May all your days ring with laughter, Dear One! Love ya lots! Linda |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
A mighty fine whole you are, my friend... and we appreciate you showing US the good! *S* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice thoughts...James |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
and I'm so glad you've integrated back into a whole by looking at the good in life adding light to OUR souls. You are precious, Linda! cathy |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Linda Sometimes the parts just feel a little rebellion...mine do...but the whole of you, is beautiful!! Thanks for the uplifting! ![]() |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Suthern One ~ From one whole to another, I thank you! ![]() May you forever be strong and not shatter into fragments! ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
James ~ Thanks for the "nice" reply! Enjoy your life! ![]() ![]() EA |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
miscellanea ~ The process of reintegration can be a difficult one, but once you become "whole" again, you have the strength to handle what may be thrown your way in life! ~ It has for me! ![]() Cathy, may you ~ and yours bones! ~ be integrated and whole! Love & Light, Linda |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Martie ~ The trick is to get those scattering little rebellions to come back into the family fold! lol ![]() Be strong! Be whole! ~ Be YOU! ![]() Linda |
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