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the time i died
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the time i died |
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DarkDreamer Junior Member
since 2004-09-04
Posts 19nowhere,special |
I still recall the time I died. I was seething with anger, while I listened to time. And I felt no more pain. The only thing I saw was colors. A glorious array of my deathful color, red. I felt so free, yet I knew I was captivated within a force I could not escape. I no longer heard my breath and I know longer had a heart. I didn’t have a body and I didn’t have a mind. All I had was the song and myself. I felt like floating and I felt like puking. Then a burst of coldness hit me, And then I could see what I didn’t want to see. I saw myself in the mirror. I wanted to go back! I didn’t want to be here! cut me, hurt me, kill me. whatever you do, im always there for you, as a foe as a friend. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a saddness I believe we have all felt, one time or another, and it is in these times,I try to remember what many things I have been blessed with...and concentrate on them... a heart piercing write, done vividly with feeling and emotion...hugs |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You have some real talent for words. Maybe too much talent, raw and hitting. Within yourself is a centre, a core, a belief. I think you have quality. Dave |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Read it again. You have talent. Dave |
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