Open Poetry #33 |
I'm glad you've come my way |
Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
The light of day no more can guide you but your mended heart is free I, with strange hands lead you, teach you less than you taught me And while you with eyes beat blank when your body lay most dead The rest of us still lived- oblivious to what they did Your hands so young, still ripe from school once wrote tests, rolled cigarettes Every so oft I see you sigh and contemplate your days Do you think you're just some blind guy? ...I'm glad you've come my way And for the record being blind doesn't change how smart you are And being young doesn't affect how old you have to be |
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ShiningWindHaze Member
since 2004-09-06
Posts 138California, United States |
You don't need my input to share. I loved your expression. It was so real. - Haze |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
What kindness your words speak of, and of insight into the gifts given to us from those we meet-in their uniqueness. Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thanks Haze - I'm glad I could describe my experience in a way that showed its 'realness' Susan - I'm learning to appreciate people's uniqueness, and that in itself is a special gift to me |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
I am actually visually impaired because I have a bit of usable vision. You have a wonderful expression here. I have been visually impaired all of my life, and I have no idea what it is like to have full sight. However, it does not matter that much because I really have not lost anything. I never had full sight in the first place. It does not change a persons inside. It is just who they are, or who they have become in some cases. |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Thanks Kristabell for sharing that. One of his frustrations is being treated differently - like he's not as capable as he is |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
loved that last verse there |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Beautiful is all that comes to my mind. :-) |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
Passing Shadows: I think many of us know about that Thank you froggy |
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