Open Poetry #33 |
A half Completed Song |
Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
The chain has been closed, You know, the one you gave me, Saying that you would forever be bonded, To me and only me. I took that chain, From around my neck, To signify the fact, That I know you are not coming back. Empty the chain rests, Alone and lost, Just like the promises you made, Not fulfilled, at my cost. An empty attempt I was given, Because you said these words, “I knew I was not the guy for you I knew from the beginning.” Your whole heart was not in it, I knew that all along, So why did I let, My heart sing a half completed song? |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I suppose because you were not afraid to take a chance? This was bittersweet, gripping the reader....good one |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
ouch is right - I did that once too, I knew and yet I continued... |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
My heart goes out to the pain in your heart and I pray that your heart and soul will soon sing the complete song to one worthy of its purity... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Thank you everyone. |
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