the way you hold me false memory

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Open Poetry #33

the way you hold me false memory

ShiningWindHaze
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since 2004-09-06

Posts 138
California, United States

0 posted 2004-09-12 07:08 PM

Softly echoing your words I remember
in this mind
coruscating
in it's own light
you gave me
being
caramel flesh soft upon my reminisce

This fantasy is what I don't remember
I've created the blatant love
false memories of the time we had that snow fight
and when you layed upon me on the snow
we kissed that icey kiss so sweet with lips that were destined to kiss
and again
I wish

The day was fading when we were on the beach
sun ever ebbing light that framed us in it's might
but soft
our hands were
holding
the moment we first held hands
looking into eachother's eyes on the tree at the
park with our friends whose love was true
and ours was too
I pity me
the way I talk of you like you're already here
but we haven't even spoken
you're a thought
a memory
I sought
but never found

Daniel Storm
Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 91
New York

1 posted 2004-09-12 11:15 PM

This has some sad overtones...

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-09-13 12:32 PM

kinda sad

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2004-09-14 07:34 PM

Nicely written

Dave

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