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Open Poetry #33
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DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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0 posted 2004-09-12 05:59 PM

Clouds on a stormy day looked into your head and moved away
Eyes black a lightning storm flowing fire without warmth
Body strong instinct
Eyes closed open blank
Stark velvet
Deep
To destroy
What you wouldn't keep
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Kristabell
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since 2003-11-29
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1 posted 2004-09-12 10:12 PM

Wow, very deep. Nice, though.
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2004-09-13 07:12 AM

Intense and so finely written....
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