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Open Poetry #33

Rhythms To A Rise

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-09-12 12:03 PM

monings first break,
the song of a swallow
softly calling today's tomorrow.
the chipper sound
breaks through a window's pane,
crystal and clear, ending this night's reign,
as dreams alive,
with lights upon shadow,
unresting souls releasing coming sorrow
in rhythms to a rise,
the days shall follow ...
each yesterday,
each tomorrow.

"In life's giving ... love is a gift, such worth living."

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2004-09-12 12:09 PM

unresting souls releasing coming sorrow
in rhythms to a rise,
the days shall follow ...

Very nice, and even nicer to read you this morning.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-09-12 12:12 PM

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

3 posted 2004-09-12 12:18 PM

in rhythms to a rise,
the days shall follow ...
each yesterday,
each tomorrow''''

~
Craig, such a way to look at life in simple terms....much depth to this....

really good to see your smile upon these pages.....hugsss you....

I don’t want the world to see me
cause I don’t think that they’d understand
When everything’s made to be broken I just want you to know who I am

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2004-09-12 09:32 PM

nice to see you flying in again

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-09-13 01:48 AM

this is precious

Margot
Member

since 2003-10-04

Posts 154

6 posted 2004-09-13 04:07 AM

Beautiful

Margot

Love is something eternal, The aspect may change, But not the essence.- Vincent Van Gogh

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-09-13 07:18 AM

Seem like you and I are presently on the same plain...as mornings are indeed a morphine curve which climbs right into my soul
Beautiful!

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