Open Poetry #33 |
Love is a Friend (Sunday's light relief) |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And the foolish sound out with brass bands to crowds love is a friend, an imaginary friend, born from a figment and fabrication of overactive imagination. Bravo, Bravo, the people bellow and move as one to the front anxious to hear each syllable clear and entrench them in memory. Puffed up like a helium balloon the spokesman goes off on a tangent with intent to lay impeccable truth at the feet of a captive audience. Hear me! Hear me! Love isn’t sweet for always it fights for life, is not always right, and quickly can swing into the moody blues. It’s known to be weak at the knees and silently suffer the intentional and unintentional severe degradation of man. Unskilled at providing protection love bows in the face of pressure when asked to deliver what’s not been received. Unbalanced it bends to a child’s level and flops on the floor with a dog but so very timid in slithers away whenever anyone shouts. It travels while standing still through channels unseen by the wise, smiles a sweet smile or cries, embraces, ignores, or chooses to pour oil onto the fire. Sometimes it blocks the path, sometimes it shows the way, which just goes to prove each day brings new views at the behest of love’s flexibility. When in a relationship with this imaginary friend called love born from a figment and fabrication of overactive imagination the impossible and highly improbable is most decidedly bound to happen. As the spokesman bowed to the ground those in the know just frowned too polite to enlighten a foolish crowd that love is no friend, imaginary friend, but the core essence of every woman born yesterday, today, and still to be born tomorrow, from incredible tenacity and unrivalled intensity! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes, love is the core essence - it is the very heart of being - Susan Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Yes, absolutely right. Thanks for the read Susan. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
What a wonderful write! Eric |
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time prophet Member
since 2003-07-30
Posts 371In New Zealand Amongst the Ancient Trees |
Delightful Helen, that bought a smile to my face. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
When in a relationship with this imaginary friend called love born from a figment and fabrication of overactive imagination the impossible and highly improbable is most decidedly bound to happen. The truth in your writing is a revelation in itself. Oh what a relief it is!! God love ya Lady Sunday~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (09-12-2004 05:26 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
enjoyed this |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Eric - Thank you for your gracious comment. tp - I'm glad it had the right effect. Bluesy - thank you. I like wrapping up truth in humour. Dixie - glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the read. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Honeybunch I agree with the others here. I enjoyed this read. :-) |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, froggy. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"As the spokesman bowed to the ground those in the know just frowned too polite to enlighten a foolish crowd that love is no friend, imaginary friend, but the core essence of every woman born yesterday, today, and still to be born tomorrow, from incredible tenacity and unrivalled intensity!" Ah, you said it so well. And, yes, it is rather humorous to watch the speaker bow and the audience clap.... ....jo |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Somehow Helen, the truth always comes through in your words~~ M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks Jo and M for the read. Truth? Perhaps being truthful is considered as an out of reach exultant state in these present times. Dunno really - just a thought. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Helen "that love is no friend, imaginary friend, but the core essence of every woman born yesterday, today, and still to be born tomorrow, from incredible tenacity and unrivalled intensity!" Yes, indeed it is! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Good to see you here, Martie. I've been thinking of you. |
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