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Blue October
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Blue October |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Blue October Tonight is perfection this night is ours alone we'll make love by the firelight hidden away from the rain in eachother's warm embrace tonight My love it is burning inside my heart, yearning shaking from your feather touch but you make me feel alright and I want to make you feel alright tonight Outside, the blue October sky is painted with silver winged stars and a white halo moon shines over this sleeping town as you lay down in my arms tonight My love and my affection for you and you alone we'll shape a love by candle light hidden away from the rain in eachother's warm embrace feels so right In the dark of night when the last spark dies from the smouldering embers I'll whisper my promises to you a loving glow in your eyes of blue the color of the predawn light in the aftermath of one perfect night together this blue October love so right so right this blue October love is perfection like your lakeshore eyes and your sunrise smile so bright "Poets are all who love, who feel great truths, and tell them; and the truth of truths is love." --Philip James Bailey |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Zach, this entire poem is lovely, but this passage, yummy - Outside, the blue October sky is painted with silver winged stars and a white halo moon shines over this sleeping town as you lay down in my arms tonight  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"this blue October love so right so right this blue October love is perfection like your lakeshore eyes and your sunrise smile so bright" Very cool lines Zach...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
one perfect night...I've had a few of those very passionate write here Zach |
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