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Open Poetry #33

My Sky (VAS's long-time-ago Sky Challenge)

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

0 posted 2004-09-11 12:06 PM

Sun in the east
Moving over treetops
Casting shadows
Through the clouds

Scattered cotton candies
Shapes in the sky
Like feathers in light
Different tones of white

Night falls soon
The cloak is donned
Casting magic
Over the world below

A sprinkle of stars
The moon hung high
They twinkle and glow
Companions through the night

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

1 posted 2004-09-11 12:25 PM

hey, i'm online too!:P

will read your latest later

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-09-11 01:57 PM

beautiful sky it is

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

3 posted 2004-09-12 05:58 AM

this has a feel-good, whimsical quality that i like

i like the stanza on clouds best. has an additional dreamy feel to it.

glad you are writing again!

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

4 posted 2004-09-12 11:39 AM

Haha... Thanks for the comments!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2004-09-12 01:45 PM

Enjoyed the imagery and the warm and cozy feeling.

Very pretty poetry, Mon Cherie~

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